http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MGMi0MUcWto

suggestions?

PD: I made the music, if anyone likes electronic music check my soundcloud.

Not bad! The music sounds a bit like something you'd hear in a James Bond video game haha. I liked how you split the screens at some parts like 1:27 to show you doing various activities. Just keep experimenting and you'll get better.  8)

thanks sean =B L0L it remids me of the meme "expectations vs reality" I swear I expected something like the trailers of jagex l0l ajjaajjaaj